loving too hard

my mouth remains dry as I lay here and wait,
wait for for a time to contemplate,
for when i don't my skin dries too,
next will be my heart,
it'll look like a prune.
loving too hard is what it's called,
im sorry I can't help it,
i just love you all.
it's harder than it seems when it's like a drug,
addictive yet dangerous,
it's something we all love.
so now you want it to leave you alone?
im afraid it's too late,
you're stuck with it now,
until you part with this world,
until you drown.

Author's Note

have only shared this with very few close, special people in my life, enjoy xx

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Wonderful and I don’t know why anyone in their right mind would want a live like this to leave them alone- if it’s teue and dedicated I’d be a prune anyway it would be worth it because when the juices if live start flowing everything becomes well plumped and hydrated once again- oh the quench of love to be satisfied- live your words- 🌹

[Pooja Chintamani]

Beautiful and emotional. Geniune feeling to touch depth of heart.

[Najam Us Saher]

'Loving too heart is what it's called' heart wrenching phrase. You expressed your emotions really well.

[Anjali]

Wow! So beautiful... I loved it a lot... The rhythming scheme is also good ..and I love those poems which rhymes.. keep up the good work!