FOR ONE

FOR ONE

A Poem by Olivera

Send me a message. Just a word.
Describe me politely.
Intimately.
With just one word.

And my lifepath shall be shallow no more...

© 2008 Olivera


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Sweetly subtle, yet full of crippling power...I love it, friend! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


...intense ~winks~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unique

Posted 16 Years Ago


I feel like you have captured the way that I feel alot of the time (and probably alot of other people) with this simple poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautifully said, the use of words is a skill when crafted into the art of poetry and to describe something with only one word, how exciting that would be for the one who is supposed to describe you. I loved the flow of this piece and the feel of it as I read it . Nicely done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


it seems that this is your newest writing. It's quaint eloquence is impressive.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You say so little while saying so much...beautiful.....eloquent...simple....good work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Olivera
Olivera

Belgrade, Serbia



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