Tastie

Dark mushrooms

On my plate.

 

Plants and cheese

On Winter's Day.

 

Heavy dish,

Italian Spell.

 

Reviews

[Bee]

Not really sure what you want to say here, but I guess you're very fond of Italian food, you know, with the cheese and mushrooms. Quick read, but delightful because of it's light air.

[Olivera]

Na set papiru koji stavljaju ispod tanjira - onom s panoramom grada. Jos sam te pitala da li da je poklonim restoranu, a ti si mi odgovorila da je sacuvamo za knjigu recepata... Eto.

[SHEE]

A kad si ovo napisala a da je ne znam.

[Olivera]

I was actually inspired after great dinner I have had in the cosy gallery of Odyssey restaurant in Belgrade one Friday evening...

[Angelic Darkness]

Hmm...reminded me of a child, maybe not wanting to eat something
left on my plate. Good poem.

[Tim McGovern]

This is almost haiku like in it's simplicity.
The few words you chose and the order you put them in brings a flood of feelings and pictures.
It's a very good poem
Thank you