Morning Haiku

A Poem by Olivera

The word Haiku is used as a description of brief thought of scenery I encountered.

Frozen streets this morning
Brown leaves, crystal sparkling
Frozen streets; as I walk,
Frozen footsteps left by me.

© 2011 Olivera

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Olivera

Thank you all for such wonderful comments. You've swept me off my feet...

Posted 13 Years Ago

Sweet_pale_cacophony

The last line..it was beautiful..it captured the essence of the poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robyn

Nice imagery, the simplicity of it is refreshing.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angelic Darkness

Another very good poem...simple, but still makes you feel
the coolness. You are a good writer:).

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

closed

Wow, Arlecchina, what beautiful artwork.

I guess you really are as much of a painter as you are a poetic artist. This is really good.

And your poem compliments it so too. It holds a dream like quantiy, all its own.

great work

-Dream

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yaooooooo

Very well written..
Keep up the good wrok and feel free to send me a request...
Thanks for sharing,
One!

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 5, 2008
Last Updated on July 2, 2011

Author

Olivera

Belgrade, Serbia

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My art work inspires my writing and vise versa. I consider haiku as very challenging poetic form and became quite attached to it since it gives me the opportunity of putting together observations i.. more..