Savage Blast

I was a bit stressed when this came to me.

vision of x-ray blue and red electricity pulsing

through hot quivering veins

 

hard external eyes of grey blue mirror reflection burn holes in brain exposing internal mind-f**k of self-immolation

 

pulse quickens and heart hammering in chest cavity explodes

 

white wet exposed spine gripped by iron fist is crushed

 

violent screams of red-hot anger erupt from ragged throat hole

 

jaw clamps shut severing blue veined tongue as teeth

pulverize into seared nerve roots

 

eyes melt, explode, and mingle with disemboweled grey gut matter

 

head blows apart leaving glistening grey matter clinging to

shattered shards of skull

 

burning chill of internal exposure penetrates pores with

tears of reality experienced

 

cruel meat hooks tear chunks of gristled flesh from limbs leaving

death meat bone exposure

 

feet burned into lymphatic blistered stumps

grind deep into ground glass

 

ravaged liver colored bile slithers to the dust of dead earth and used skin of mega-death

 

in a last convulsed celebration of destruct lust
i vaporize into blood gas

Reviews

[Serenity]

Great use of powerful adjectives to give chilling and foreboding mood. Abstract, yet true to the minute details of such extreme emotion.

[Oliver Andreas]

thank you for reading

[Red & Blue]

.......Speechless...........

[Oliver Andreas]

Thank you... I sometimes actually do feel that way!