greatest fear

the greatest fearof an imortal is losing love, could be a cleshae,but i think its beautiful.

I’m scared of the pain, the pain I just caused,

I’m seeing who I sucked over again more and more,

These tears where did they come from,

That’s it I’ve felt this pain, and then some,

Now I know exactly why I did cry,

Because all along I had the right guy,

Just this one this he was so obedient,

Opened his heart for me and I squeezed it,

This horrid life was not meant for me,

Anything else, a rat I plea,

Or anywhere else is where I want to be,

But in the end it’s him I see.

 

Reviews

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

Nice writing =) It's straight to the point and very realistic! Really enjoyed reading this, and it really helps that you know how a person feels when you read something...

[Sujash I. Purna]

cliche? never! It's good poetry! keep it up!