nothing beats

another cheesy one! if you like cheesy poems, this could be for you. if you don't don't sorry, you might not make it through the 3rd stanza...lol

all my life i was dreaming

nothing much i could do

never thought that one day

you would actually come true

if i had one more favor

one more wish that i could make

i would ask God to let me spend with you

all the rest of my days

counting day after day

watching tears running dry

holding hands, chasing dreams

together touching skies

every day that i wake beside you

i thank that God i'm alive

but if this life's not long enough

i will have to live twice

how ever dark the night may be

my love will always light your dawn

my love will be your music

when all of the music's gone

and i come and i go

i rise and i fall

i keep falling in love with you

all this world i could keep

but still nothing beats

falling in love with you

all my life i was dreaming

Author's Note

pls be kind...XD

Reviews

[Que]

I really love this!
I don't often go for cheesy things, but, there you go. Lol.
Great poem. :)
Cheers and have a good day.

[Kesha]

Wow! I'm speechless! This was such a great poem! With very amazing imagery! I even read this to my friend and she loved it too! You my friend are an amazing writer! :) I love this poem