Chained Sanity (A Love Poem)

It started out as a song, but then I decided to play around with the rhymes, and it ended up too cheesy for a song. So here's a poem that gave me a hard time coming up with a title.

I'm reaching out to tell her

How lovely all has been

It's come to pass, I feel at last

The sun upon my skin

My heart is warmed 

Just looking at the wind against her hair

And her scent that never leaves me

Reminds me she's always there

Her smile puts in my heart

A million songs for me to sing

Her love teaches me that flight

Never really needed any wings

She makes me rise, she makes me run

Across an open field

Of dreams I've only dreamt of dreaming

Where only her love is revealed

Her beauty shines above me

Like the rising of the morn

And as her smile meets my sight

I melt away just to be reborn

Reborn into a brand new being 

Like a flower with no name

Like a word yet without meaning

A new torch with but the same flame

And God, it feels so good to be alive

When you see all your dreams coming up to life

She's my freedom and she's my chains

And if I'd ever want to break free, then I must be insane

Wow, all that trouble with rhymes. 

When all I really wanted to say was

I love her. 

Author's Note

^_^

Reviews

[Que]

This is incredibly sweet :)
Yes, it is pretty cheesy, but the nice thing is that often times, people use the same types of expressions, whereas you made new ones. You know what I mean?
Favourite lines:
"Her smile puts in my heart
A million songs for me to sing
Her love teaches me that flight
Never really needed any wings"
I have to say, this really made me smile.
Great job!
Cheers and have a good day.

[Demi Rose]

exceptionally sweet and endearing.

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Awww. Any girl would melt when you read it to her! I love it!

[Aleyah]

I love the flow for this. Obviously it's an adorable little piece, but also beautiful as far as the word usage and the smoothness of the poem. I can feel the love behind this, for reallll. The first stanza is amazingggG! And the last stanza is sweet...because it's just straight up!!! The best way to be. ANYWAY brilliant poem!

[Kate Hunter]

Oh, I think I melted a little. Well done, it's adorable. Keep it up. Sometimes cheesy is a good thing.

[ducky(:]

This is amazing! I love it! and I agree it is cheesy but most of the time cheesy is cute!

[Kesha]

Awww that's really cute! Very wonderful rhyming! I absolutely love this poem! It's fantastic!