DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH

DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH



Dance with me upon this Earth.

Transcend the ordinary and Dance with me.

Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom.

You are a Poet of the Universe and you are dressed with beams of Light.

You have a Passion for Living that Speaks to the Spirit.

Live with me in a World without limits.

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.

Dance with me upon this Earth and Cultivate a Lifetime of Joy.

Reviews

[desertsky]

Wow, someone who isn't writing dark! Thank you! I love your word choices and the imagery of your poem. My only criticism is the two souls only two lines apart. Maybe one of them could be changed. It would be hackneyed to use heart with romance, but what about using it with the first soul? Well, whatever you decide, it's great to read something so positive!

[Stephanie McCants]

Very uplifting it makes the reader want to do better things in this life.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Oh, I absolutely adore it. It speaks with the love and the passion I have for my partner. I can't "feel" your emotions through your words vividly. Dance with Life! Very nice ~ Jude :-)

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This is good! It is very beautiful! To dance with someone special means so much to people. I think you captured the feelings well. Very good work!

[Julie Dant]

Wow, Micheal. What a beautifully written poem. "Dance with me upon this Earth." Can one person ask anything more beautiful of another? Simply to dance.
And "Live with me in a world without limits." Wow, again. I am loving your choice of words here. Pure splendor.
Can't say enough postitive about this one, but that is true for most I've seen of your work. You exude positive.

[Erin Phoenix]

I feel like dancing now.... haha...

:) I love this.

[E. M. Murren]

This is really beautiful. The tone of the words as well as the structure... it floats gracefully. Cheers.

[Ru Banerjee]

pure, true and celestial...to its core! Truly moving piece of poem...

[Kathleen Cavender]

This is a very moving piece. You are an exquisite arranger of the written word. Thank you for sharing your gift so generously. The warmth of it radiates across cyberspace.

[BelieveInCelia]

Spoken from the heart...love in purest form.... so beautifully written.

Celia