DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH

DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH



Dance with me upon this Earth.

Transcend the ordinary and Dance with me.

Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom.

You are a Poet of the Universe and you are dressed with beams of Light.

You have a Passion for Living that Speaks to the Spirit.

Live with me in a World without limits.

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.

Dance with me upon this Earth and Cultivate a Lifetime of Joy.

Reviews

[desertsky]

Wow, someone who isn't writing dark! Thank you! I love your word choices and the imagery of your poem. My only criticism is the two souls only two lines apart. Maybe one of them could be changed. It would be hackneyed to use heart with romance, but what about using it with the first soul? Well, whatever you decide, it's great to read something so positive!

[Sarah B.]

very Leonard Cohenish...i like your choice of words and the use of uppercase letters throughout the poem

[Sofie and the City]

Life is celebration and you were born to bloom--

Life is wonderful indeed and I agree we are born to bloom so let us make our spirits always high and never give up--- I was moved by your words.. cheers!

[Melissa]

I enjoyed the imagery of this write as I was reading it. It almost has a lyrical feel to it. Sort of a ballet dance underneath the stars. Very pretty

[Stacy]

You should think of entering these in some of the contests I hold.

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Life's dance is wondrous ... and the key s very much to dance together ... as you say.

[closed account]

you write so beautifuly!! so inspirational!! I want to dance and have your positive energy on life! shall we? lol great poem!!

[SilentDream]

"... you were Born to Bloom."

"... you are dressed with beams of Light."

I absolutely LOved the thoughts expressed in this piece.
Wonderful work, Poet! Pen on.

((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

Romantic! I loved this poem. To dance with someone you love... What better thing could there be?

[Christina2]

What yummy words provoking a life of movement and yet stillness in love's embrace.
Lovely, thank you for sharing