DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH

DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH



Dance with me upon this Earth.

Transcend the ordinary and Dance with me.

Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom.

You are a Poet of the Universe and you are dressed with beams of Light.

You have a Passion for Living that Speaks to the Spirit.

Live with me in a World without limits.

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.

Dance with me upon this Earth and Cultivate a Lifetime of Joy.

Reviews

[desertsky]

Wow, someone who isn't writing dark! Thank you! I love your word choices and the imagery of your poem. My only criticism is the two souls only two lines apart. Maybe one of them could be changed. It would be hackneyed to use heart with romance, but what about using it with the first soul? Well, whatever you decide, it's great to read something so positive!

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Beautiful!

[Nautili]

very inspiring. I especially like,"Live with me in a world without limits"- I know what it is like to be tried to be put in a box. I had a prophet tell me once that he saw me trapped in a box that others had put me in, and God was telling me to jump out, and to jump high. I don't know if I've done that yet, but I try in miniscule ways to get out of that box. This guy did not know me, and it resonated within. He told me my gifts would emerge more fully when I was free of trying to fit other's expectations. I guess that is what you are trying to say here also. good work.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Lovely poem!

I love the lines:

"Transcend the ordinary and Dance with me.

Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom."
Beautifully written...

Lynda

[stephanee]

I, too, appreciate reading the work of someone who is doing their best to be uplifting with their words. I find it hard to do, sometimes. "You are a Poet of the Universe." This line resonates with me.

[Aspiring Angel]

How very pretty and touching this is. Your last two lines reminds myself how important it is to me to share with others and to read myself the hearts of others. A poet no matter of what gender they are are bonded by the passion to express and need to be fed by others to continue our journey as poets. I always enjoy my visits with you. Blessings, Lesa

[Blackvelvet]

Very Nice we are all trying to do the dance of life somefind it easier than others, if only more people would reach out we could make the earth a hall and hold a world dance united !

[Deborah Shepard]

life is the best spiritual celebration your writing is beauty

[angelina neves]

wonderful! I'm dancing the same dance in the other side of the Earth but almost in the same universe! :)

[Debbie_Philly]

This poem moved me to my soul... I felt as though it was written just for me. I love it !! Very beautiful, touching and very well written !!! BRAVO !!!

[Not Really Here Anymore]

Several lines here touch me in a profound way. "in a World without limits and also Born to Bloom," in particular spoke to me. Very,very nice indeed. I enjoyed this.