DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH

DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH



Dance with me upon this Earth.

Transcend the ordinary and Dance with me.

Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom.

You are a Poet of the Universe and you are dressed with beams of Light.

You have a Passion for Living that Speaks to the Spirit.

Live with me in a World without limits.

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.

Dance with me upon this Earth and Cultivate a Lifetime of Joy.

Reviews

[desertsky]

Wow, someone who isn't writing dark! Thank you! I love your word choices and the imagery of your poem. My only criticism is the two souls only two lines apart. Maybe one of them could be changed. It would be hackneyed to use heart with romance, but what about using it with the first soul? Well, whatever you decide, it's great to read something so positive!

[hannah]

An expressive poem and very optimistic. Simple but inspiring nonetheless. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

[:)]

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.


I'm in love with that phrase :)

[Holly]

Beautifully written. :] Your words are rather inspiring.

[Padma]

I liked the idea. The optimism in your words is inspiring. The freedom of living one's own life the way we want is what everybody wants, but only a few get. And when someone offers you that freedom...and asks you to dance with him on this limitless terrain called life....it all seems life a real dream.

[Samantha.Silence]

i love reading your poems! they simply just amaze me =D

[Lizanne]

Beautiful. So much said in a few brief lines. Looking forward to reading more of your works.

[Lilith]

Lovely poem.
Very light-hearted, and very inspiring.

[Clint Hale]

This is fantastic. I like how uplifting I feel as I read each line. I couldn't help but think how few people there are like this in the world.

You seem to be a very optimistic fellow :)


"You are a Poet of the Universe" - My favorite line

[Hanan_Maliah]

Beautifully script'd, I liked the pull of it into the journey of findings!

[poetic soul]

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.

Really loved this line a lot........vivid imagination and classy expression.. :)