DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH

DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH



Dance with me upon this Earth.

Transcend the ordinary and Dance with me.

Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom.

You are a Poet of the Universe and you are dressed with beams of Light.

You have a Passion for Living that Speaks to the Spirit.

Live with me in a World without limits.

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.

Dance with me upon this Earth and Cultivate a Lifetime of Joy.

Reviews

[desertsky]

Wow, someone who isn't writing dark! Thank you! I love your word choices and the imagery of your poem. My only criticism is the two souls only two lines apart. Maybe one of them could be changed. It would be hackneyed to use heart with romance, but what about using it with the first soul? Well, whatever you decide, it's great to read something so positive!

[Blue tailed kite]

Absolutely wonderful

[Vrushali Ohatker]

"A passion for living that speaks to the spirits, live with me a world without limits"

Beautiful! Just lovely! How true it is that everything you do needs passion...be it dancing, singing, laughing, crying. Life has to be lived with passion, every moment of it. 'Cause each moment spent in the present lived with passion will surely be more gratifying than an eternity of mediocre living.

So we really should transcend from he ordinary...mediocre living in other words.

Amazing poem sir! I'm not as good a poet as you are, or I'd rather say I'm not a poet at all. I'm 16 and have just about managed to write a poem or two and I'm so inspired!

Just plain and simple, lovely!

-Vrushali.

[Gem Marie]

Just the phrase "dance with me" brings me to a place I call home. Not just a particular place, but a feeling. A very strong feeling. Absolutely love. Majestic.

[Liz]

This is beautiful. My favourite line is "Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom."

[Donna Marie Gray]

Lovely. Beautifully written and visually enchanting. I love it.

[cest la vie]

*Sigh*
This is what I call a simply beautiful poem. Peaceful, loving, flows like sand through fingertips. Truly a delight to read. thank you for sharing this with us.
Lynne

[Through the Gateway]

This is very beautiful piece Michael! And very, very profound. I loved it immensely.

[Word Mistress]

This was inspiring.Your choice of words are perfectly chosen and evoke a mood of hope!

[THERISA]

Reading this poem, one is left with the feelings of hope and longing for a lover's existance to be realize by the object of their affections. I do agree with Desertky, the usage of "Soul" that close together should be change but not sure what to replace it with. Thank you for sharing this romantic poem with us.

[Cassandra D.]

wow...this was absolutely awesome!
I loved this poem. very well said.