DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH

DANCE WITH ME UPON THIS EARTH



Dance with me upon this Earth.

Transcend the ordinary and Dance with me.

Life is a Celebration and you were Born to Bloom.

You are a Poet of the Universe and you are dressed with beams of Light.

You have a Passion for Living that Speaks to the Spirit.

Live with me in a World without limits.

My Confidence Soars when you Romance my Soul.

Dance with me upon this Earth and Cultivate a Lifetime of Joy.

Reviews

[desertsky]

Wow, someone who isn't writing dark! Thank you! I love your word choices and the imagery of your poem. My only criticism is the two souls only two lines apart. Maybe one of them could be changed. It would be hackneyed to use heart with romance, but what about using it with the first soul? Well, whatever you decide, it's great to read something so positive!

[Maya Luna]

Absolutely magical and very uplifting!

[Katie Thew]

I sow, I skip, I tap my toes. Always nice to find a kindred friend. Thank you for this lovely bit!

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Michael,
I find such delight and wisdom reading your stories, poems and quotes.
I see you as a very, deep person and thinker. Your messages are from your heart and soul.
You seem to have had, and still have so many adventures to share.
I found this site just a few days ago, so I'm still navigating the process; however, I look forward to reading (and learning) all of your postings.
To me, you seem to be the epitome of great wisdom, adventure and insight.
Anne (pronounced Annie)

[heich]

you are so good..i love the message,the words..everything...one of my favorite..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

enthralling~enlivening~ beautifully woven~

[Christy]

This was refreshing after reading such sadness everywhere else. This will go in my library!

[Denise Deas]

Absolutely beautiful. The imagery is absoliutely wonderful, it makes me feel as if i am dancing throught the air with gods. It really speaks to me in good ways, it's a posotive poem and it puts a smile on my face. I am truly inspired to at least think a little more positively. Though it may not seem so i ahving a hard time putting how i feel about this poem into words. This is just ridiculously amazing to me. even though it is short it is very sweet and inviting and helpful and just all around. I can't find any criticism to make. Beautiful.

[just rose.]

the sentiments in this poem are gorgeous and inspiring.

[MissWordSmith]

very beautiful!

[Honeypot]

Now this is a lovely invitation for somebody to join their life with yours and to explore every possibility. This is the way a love poem should be. It's fresh and compelling. "my confidence soars when you romance my soul" is my favorite line. Beautiful job.