Very well written, and very thought provoking. This writing brings about the feeling of peace and serenity I feel it is meant to do. Very good writing, and a very positive message. I also need to put some gentle writing on this site. I have another site on writerscafe, but do some writing for children, and will not place erotica on it for obvious reasons. Still, I want to place some writing on this one that is not angry stuff. This site was put here for the purpose of making political points, at times using methods I do not necessarily want to sign my name to, but want to write. My writing always has a purpose that is deeper than erotica, but erotica is one way of getting some issues across, especially issues of sexual freedom, or sexism, etc. Brandi Delilah, is actually my dog, and these are her pictures.
The story I plan to use this site to write will be titled "Dog Days of Summer," which will be a humor filled story told from a dog's point of view. It will have some off color humor, and will be adult writing. I plan to also write a children's versian of the story with a different title, and it will be on my other site. Do keep reading my stuff on this site, and find the message that is inside all the junk. Some people will never read anything worthy that is not hidden inside something they think is supposed to be sexual, thus Brandi Delilah, my pet, came to have her own site. You seem like someone who will also read some deep stuff, knowing it isn't all about sex. LOL. More than one way to skin a cat, but I can't tell you who I am, because that would defeat the purpose of this site. I do not want my identity known by very many people at all. Brandi Delilah
Very well written, and very thought provoking. This writing brings about the feeling of peace and serenity I feel it is meant to do. Very good writing, and a very positive message. I also need to put some gentle writing on this site. I have another site on writerscafe, but do some writing for children, and will not place erotica on it for obvious reasons. Still, I want to place some writing on this one that is not angry stuff. This site was put here for the purpose of making political points, at times using methods I do not necessarily want to sign my name to, but want to write. My writing always has a purpose that is deeper than erotica, but erotica is one way of getting some issues across, especially issues of sexual freedom, or sexism, etc. Brandi Delilah, is actually my dog, and these are her pictures.
The story I plan to use this site to write will be titled "Dog Days of Summer," which will be a humor filled story told from a dog's point of view. It will have some off color humor, and will be adult writing. I plan to also write a children's versian of the story with a different title, and it will be on my other site. Do keep reading my stuff on this site, and find the message that is inside all the junk. Some people will never read anything worthy that is not hidden inside something they think is supposed to be sexual, thus Brandi Delilah, my pet, came to have her own site. You seem like someone who will also read some deep stuff, knowing it isn't all about sex. LOL. More than one way to skin a cat, but I can't tell you who I am, because that would defeat the purpose of this site. I do not want my identity known by very many people at all. Brandi Delilah
First of all, what a wonderful poem! I love the sense of freedom that comes with the image of the flying eagle, and the spirit that is conveyed here. Secondly, thanks for reviewing my poem.
Where the eagle flies..........beautiful imagery of the soul flying above the mundane,mediocre aspects of self, and choosing to soar up into a higher spiritual realm. Life gives us many opportunities to fly, many times they are harsh and unpleasant. It is easy to fly when the winds are gentle and the sun is shining on our backs.But the bigger, contrary winds are where we can learn to glide on strong currents.............Sometimes we complain over our circumstances, adopting a victim mentality, and unwittingly clip our wings, keeping us earthbound. I have done this. We all have done this.
But clipped wings can grow back, and then we will be wiser, stronger, more self aware. Then our spirits CAN soar and see vistas we heretofore thought unimaginable. very inspiring work, michael.
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