A Haiku for Love

Love is amazing
A full soul of caring, full,
Nothing if not bliss.

Love is hurtful
Love will tear, wrench, destroy, rip,
Your heart fully

But in the end, Love,
Love will pacify your heart
Comfort, completely.

Love.

Reviews

[Brytt]

5,7,5 ; 4,7,4 ; 5,7,5 ; 1

Close! Still, this is very true, very deep, and very elegant. It's simple, but at the same time it's like I'm there...

[Almost sane]

:) thanks. Even though the second verse has a mistake... My girlfriend pointed it out for me. See if you can find it...

[Aleyah]

Beautiful, simple :) I love haiku, this is fabulous, great piece :)