Dreams

Creative Poetry Prompts Inspired This Poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dreams orbit my soul as I contemplate the oneness

We shared everything so freely and sweetly

Dancing in the oneness we became

I delight in a familiar taste

 

Love is an extension of the light radiating from within

Bathing us with warmth, comfort and hope

Melt our defenses so completely away

We have more love to share

 

Serenity is the pillow upon which I rest my stirrings

Questions about the weight of our love do

Lift away leaving us vibrant, lighter

You live in me; I live in you

 

In remoteness we set about on an inner discovery

Exploring the recesses within and without us

Delving deeper into crevices unseen

Freed of self imposed shackles

 

The inclination of our true paths meets beyond us

Spiraling upwards and outwards in a rush

Density of darkness falls off illumining

The beauty true of all man

 

The intrigue of unexplored territories of mind in us

Delights all senses and titillates curiosity

Expanding possibilities we blaze trails

Undiscovered unexplored

 

The joy enveloping us is palpable and in all things

Joy is the stuff of life in and through all

Feeding and sustaining the life inside us

Joy is the pinnacle aspired

 

Author's Note

This was written using the poetry promts from the Creative Poetry Group with the following words...
serenity, extension, orbit, remoteness, inclination, intrigue, palpable

Reviews

[toniwilliamsga]

i can see this dream as it were my own. his is really beautiful.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is simple lovely. The imagery is done very well and I can picture this poem dancing within my mind. The flow is smooth.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wow! This is incredibly beautiful Veronica. Soul moving actually. You did an awesome job with our homework :)

[kdpgrahi]

Excellent Veronica, the prompts suitably placed. I like the last line,' Joy is the pinnacle aspired' How beautifully said.