Hope Storm

Looking out at storms across the skies this piece unleashed itself into my spirit. Thank you to "Beautiful Amazing World's Photos" for use of the perfect picture...check them out on Facebook!

Hope Storms

 

Hopes for peace and love gather on the horizon

They go up from many minds out into the ethers

Building like dark storm clouds swirling up above

They gather with one another and join to like kind

 

Colliding thoughts gather mass intensifying hope

Expanding possibilities from darkness into light

United intentions electrify lightning’s potential

When enough hope and love can stick together

 

An unstoppable surge goes forth condensing love

Ripping out darkness with a great and terrible force

Lightning striking at the heart of darkness and greed

Resounding the loud thunderous clap of minds united

 

Greed and hate may stifle but hope boils in the sky

Like the greatest of storm clouds churning green

Skies like monstrous living creatures ready to unleash

 

The greatest force of all…

Hope

Pouring like buckets of rain!

 

Dousing even the most raging flames of hatred and greed

A united thirst for greed’s shackles shed like snake skin

Sloughed off… now bright new hope buffed skin displayed

Possibilities lay bare, ripe and ready for…

Harvest of plenty

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I feel like the second-to-last stanza is a little cliche, but the rest of the piece is fairly well-put-together. You ought to change the font, though - you don't really gain anything by it and it does make the piece a little more difficult to read. Other than that, though, well done.

[Veronica Chandler]

Thank you ever so much for the great and honest critique, for they are ultimately the best and most productive kind. Just because it is my favorite font doesn't make it is easy read.

[jen]

The message is is the best and I really like the thought of all good energy collecting and growing in strength, ready to be tapped into.

[Veronica Chandler]

Thank you so much Jenny...I appreciate the review immensely. Sometimes it feels like humanity's storm is one of negativity and I felt compelled to show the other side of the coin.