Wind Swept Mind

Just practicing a new technique in writing...

Wind Swept Mind

When you come across the chaos,

Of my windswept mind, tarry.

Dance with my spirit for a bit;

Linger with my pain and sit.

 

You know not what gift you may give,

What comes back may surprise you.

Delight can come from a lost place

Life can teach us with our grace

 

Mighty is the way of loving

Strength in a nod or a wave

Seems like such a small thing to do

The smallest gesture creates

 

Sending the wave out there today

Shifts the life for everyone

Immeasurable is loves light

Incomprehensible too

 

Reviews

[Leigh]

The opening two lines carry this poem well and mix the subjects of nature and the human mind that create a reminder of how integrated we are with everything around us. The message of love is very strong too.

[Veronica Chandler]

Your review delights me and I appreciate it very much...Thank you.

[Poetic Beauty]

The details in this piece are splendid. It has a relaxing feel to it. The last stanza sums up this piece quite well and I really like the use of the word tarry. It is a word that many do not use in their writing.

[Veronica Chandler]

Thank you so much Poetic Beauty...I am trying a new technique with this piece, and it is a challenge for me to write with any constraints, which is why I enjoy writing with The Creative Poetry Group prompts. I appreciate the review...

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. I write many different styles and try new ideas. I haven't written a rhyming one for ages. Should do it again although my brain seems to like to make things rhyme so even in free flow it will come out with some rhymes here and there.

[Tate Morgan]

Winds waves and love all wash over us and when they meet we never forget it

[Veronica Chandler]

Amen...
Thank you ever so much for the review.

[Chris]

Listening to the "silence" call

[Veronica Chandler]

Thank you for the review..