Just Your Average, Understanding Screw-Up.

Just Your Average, Understanding Screw-Up.

A Poem by Electric Fascination
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I know I make mistakes but just once

it would be fantastic if you understood

my intentions are honest.

every single thing i do with my life

revolves around you.

every single my mind comes across

is related to you. 

and yet you complain i don’t care enough

or don’t show my love right.

and maybe i don’t, but tell me..

if you’ll ever find someone who puts up with

your ranting and sensitivity, sad and feeling

alone in the world and saying the oddest

phrases and listening to songs with no

rhythm and taking pictures at wierd angles

and making that ridiculous and obnoxious

laugh, doing what any one else would

become furious at,

but it’s you. 

and search the whole world to find someone 

who gets that fact.

and yet i say and do the wrong thing over

and over

and i’m sorry.

© 2010 Electric Fascination


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Added on October 28, 2010
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Electric Fascination
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Writing is second-nature to me, but I haven't done in it so long I feel its going to slip away. I have been told that I have a talent, but sometimes I don't have time, or just can't find inspiration. .. more..

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