All I Ever Needed

written quickly, about a true friend who was there for me when love was not.

long nights on the phone

staring into your eyes

smiling all the while

giggling, laughing

happiness filling

until you broke my heart.

all i ever needed 

all i could ever want

was all a lie

long nights talking in pajamas

escapades before dawn

smiling all the while

hysterical laughing

this is true joy

helped patch up my heart.

all i ever needed

all i could ever want

a friend who was always there

i just needed to 

open my eyes.

Reviews

[Hippy]

i love how this flows just rolls so smoothly i like it even if you dont

[victoria]

this was so sweet. although its not one of your greatest pieces (and i understand you did not write it for that intention) it still shows so much emotion is such short lines. i can almost feel how thankful you are for that person who helped you through a tough time. one thing you could do to make it a little better is maybe capitalizing and punctuating sentences, but really its not necessary. i loved it :D

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This was really free flowing.. sounds like you have a really great friendship with someone who has always been there for you.. that is a treasure in and of itself! Maybe sounds like the friendship was underrated or taken for granted.. but aren't all relationships at some point until a person wakes up? Friendships like that are few and once in a lifetime sometimes.. good you opened your eyes.. as many do not as their worried about the "in" crowds.. loved the feel of this one!

[Emily B]

those friends are always the most important part of who we are

this is a good write