Run

Staring at the Sun,

Hair catching the breeze.

A smile begins to spread,

Loving this momment,

A free feeling.

So just leave,

Things behind

That will strive,

On what is already with them.

Go on,

No worries.

Be proud.

Be free.

Just Run.

 

 

Reviews

[nostal]

Wonderful,
enlightening.

[Arthur Crow]

This is a beautiful poem to start my day.. it is a gem, the mood and flow is pure sunshine!

Nice presentation.

[deep]

I like this poem.
It is awesome.
Ur a pretty good writer by the way.
:) keep it up