The boat

The story is my friend and I were out with 2 guys and ended up staying in a boat till 5 am and i almost lost my virginity.

the rock of the boat

motion of the waves

stowing away like bears

sleeping in caves

kiss me softly

don't speak to loud

as the cold chills you

wrap your arms around

my chest

my hips

as i look into your eyes

and whisper on your lips

stay with me

please don't run

no trouble was intended

in our teenage fun

i'll give you a gift

a secret for you

i'll follow your lead

just tell me what to do

pants on your ankles

lips on my neck

like a runner starting their 1st race

on your mark, get set

but i'm not ready to go

when the pains goes through my legs

please stop 

don't make me beg

my friend across is having fun

she wants to stay

so he holds me close

and i start to feel okay

slowly dusk turns to dawn

the night has to end

as the cops take away 

our new found friends

maybe we'll meet again

another day

but i'll never forget when

my innocence was almost taken away.

Author's Note

what do you think of the rhyming? i have always wrote like this and i don't know if it sounds weird or too childish or something like that.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Little confused in tone.

[caitlin_nicoel17]

I llove it. This is a great poem.

[WideEyedAbyss]

i really like it. it tells a story as it goes on. and the rhyming is great in it

[Makayla]

aw thanks, i wasn't sure if it came off as telling a story or not :)