Warmth and Joy

My friend asked me for this. Hope she enjoys it.

When I first saw you, I knew.

I knew the passion. The pain. The happiness and negativity and wholeheartedness

And

Heartbreak...

I knew.

The swirling green emeralds of your eyes captivated me

Left me gasping, gazing, gaping

Hungering for your unique stare

You are frivolous with your emotions

Spreading them like smooth butter on the simple bread that is my heart

I crumbled beneath them

Melting away

In bliss

When I first saw you, I knew.

I could tell that this would be

Special

This would happen, whether we wanted it to or not

We couldn't predict what was to come

But we could get a feeling

And oh, did I get a feeling.

You walk past, unaware

Of the pure ecstasy that overwhelms me

When you simply utter a phrase

That would make any other girl chuckle

But makes me adore you that much more

You may not be mine just yet

But I yearn for you, sometimes lust for you

When I first saw you, I knew

That you must be mine.

Author's Note

Not usually good with lovey-dovey stuff. I don't mind if I receive criticism, I understand.

Reviews

[Kuro]

Oh, trust me, she DID enjoy it. ;) Thank you for this poem. I nod my head in approval every time I read it. This is honestly one of the best things I've ever read. It means a lot to me that you wrote it despite the fact that you didn't want to. Keep it up, because you have an incredible amount of talent. Thanks again.

[Lina Grey]

Since I know what this is about, it's hard for me to read without laughing. But it's very well-penned. The emotions are deep and intense and the whole tpiece lacks hesitation. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice poem of love. When love come. Mind and heart will know. I like the way you described the desire and the goal. No weakness in this poem of love and hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[shinybluestars03]

Great poem.
Really enjoyed the way ur described and detailed the poem all around.
Keep on writing
and thanks for sharing.

Best wishes