Heat escape

 

 

 

 

Breaking the eventide
in form of barely there
Cunninghams crystal
cool, mountain view
these drips in the forest
lick the humidity
as dragons fly in pair
rolling
upon the rock side
a look of heavens stair
in this liquid
immensity
ninety degree heat leaves
broken a wake, drifting
head wept
one freezes
in piercing stream
like ice sickles tingling
as your tongue rushes under
to partake the never ending
where one can complete
in perfect calm surrender

Reviews

[Souladareatease]

To be so one with what you hiked, or saw, or just felt in nature, and bring it so good over to here, makes me smile, this write was intense, soft erotic, and you made love to nature. Very well done my dear friend.
And sorry I am so often away... I try to keep up! :D great pen!

- Elisa

[Souladareatease]

So Very Kind Elis:D ...Always nature and I are hand in hand...I live it...travel from it to other parts...VERY VERY hot here today--this waterfall was a MUST!!!I tell You never worry such things-You do FAR better than I...I am away quite often here of late:( behind on EVERYONE...I have slipped in to scratch an etching here and there then duck out to work upon other writes...they are long...I hope to post sometime in the near future...time and energy=such fickle beasts these evil ones :)

Ah so good, it WAS real poetry! yay! love that. Same here, very hot temperature. We only have a little waterfall near a park here, (I'm often there). For they are refreshing and beautiful. Take your time, I know in all your work you need full effort, for it speaks volume. Time eat's me alive dear, so I understand... aaarh we need to have a machine or a futures way to have the possibility to buy time :-) (scary thought actually)...

[Souladareatease]

Most of My Nature writes are--more "real" time ...such places are needed desperately!!! I could picture You amongst them!!! (You ARE TOO kind, I thank You) If that happens the aristocracy would hold the lions share and we will be left with the dribble of stream---but indeed ALWAYS we need more---One day we WILL have it...I can honestly say...other than work- my time is MOSTLY owned by My wants in venture...some chore---but the most time consuming ones are winter ones...the rest are done in a flash :) steal every minute for Your own guilty pleasures Dear--leave the least amount of regretted time behind.

Exactly, nature lovers always shall pick up as if their lives could end eny minute each detail... and so do you. We are forever musing, and it's not only on bla bla things, but in nature I mean, what is more beautiful than absorbing each and every colorful detail? these persons are rare to find now days who do... it can be going about all things, but just to have a breathe and poetry, is my kind. Winter is best to write, I agree... I did some of my best poetry during the winter time. Summer is foggy, moggy, and hot, and humid here. I have to go, speak soon my friend, always a pleasure to share ideas with you. :)

[Souladareatease]

Indeed Elis Be well Dear!!! (yes same weather here lol) Rare indeed!!!Always Pleasure!!!

Don't let those mosquitoes bite you!!! BE SOUR!!! haha ;-) till soon friend!

[Souladareatease]

Indeed:)Sour apple-sparkle- Be Good to Yourself My Friend!!!

Always, you too :)

[rhythm&blues]

Very beautiful, I find nature inspirational as well, but have yet to write about it, this might be my inspiration. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

[Aethereal]

A well written erotic interlude with Nature on a hot day. I also enjoyed that touch of rhyme throughout. Gaea has her charms.

[Lily Mae]

Oh Gabe... You have allowed this moment in nature to make love to your readers sigh :). Well done my friend... Xoxo

[Kenneth The Poet]

Found via my news feed. I like this. This is my glass of poetic ice water for the day.

[Souladareatease]

Thanks Kenneth:) Greatly appreciate the read and Kind comment!!!

[Dev~lovableguy]

There is something always romantic about nature and your work brings out the eroticism of it. Good one brother...liked yours poem! :)

[Souladareatease]

Indeed it draws one in eh? Thanks Dev-hubled indeed Kind Sir!!!

[quinfinn]

i have just been to the mountains, seen your dragonflies frolic in the mist of a cascading waterfall and drunk in the sun of a glorious summer's day. this is exquisite and resonant writing. well done, my friend!

[Souladareatease]

I'm glad You visited kind Sir!!! that's some c-c-cold water says the incredible shrinking man!!!