A garden of roses

How well it came to be
that sunset
at the fount of Eve
dominoes and piccolo's
fell and noted
a garden of roses
circles the tree

Therein trees top
rests a white dove
swathed softened sweet spot
nesting her Young
up there sees squirrels run
hiding a found nut
before it was caught

Out here in the glen
where the pixie pray
fawn dance ever beckoning
moonlight falls spray
their lighten cascades
streams glisten gentle waves
settling rest in zephyr wind

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is a gorgeous painting of a utopian natural universe, dazzling imagery and profound metaphor make this a masterpiece of "garden of eden" type beauty and splendor. well penned!

[Souladareatease]

I thank You My Brother---I could LIVE in such a place!!!

[Androglossia]

Mesmerizing. The kind of world I've always wanted to be in. Where doves can rest above the trees and squirrels can grab nuts without being questioned.

[Souladareatease]

Indeed :) Thank You Maryanne for visiting my humble writes!!!

[Androglossia]

It's my pleasure and know that I always will.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

excellent read an write

[Souladareatease]

humbled-I thank You Brandon!!!-appreciate the read-most kind

[Frieda P]

Utterly romantic, gentle read....and you know zephyr is my favorite word! Simply beautiful my friend.

[Souladareatease]

Awwww why thank You Frieda much appreciated--indeed it tis a lovely word--i love all the greek winds...the Roman as well---magic to such things--but indeed i have seen You use Zephyr a bit;)....me thinx it could fit any poem just fine eh :)
Be well!!!

[Frieda P]

Yes it is magical, my pleasure always :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful to the last word kind poet...A great job...:)

[Souladareatease]

appreciated Sami-i thank You Kind Poet!!!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)