Again came the question The tissue, the tie, the smile and a thank You? Was it necessary? Clotted with thoughts of Her screams blue thunderbird passion Calm, elation Bringing Her vehicle to a halt He held the tissue, wiping his nose, rolled up sleeve letting it drip between his fingers Fleshed thoughts and bits blood curdling sublime, a sneezed time of life
The army ranger tattoo the decoration of a once important part of a well oiled machine say what you will there was a day when this man was righteous and important slippery slopes and cold nights alone will surely take you places...... places not so familiar juggled jargon of a life once lived but is'nt it who you love the trouble you can take that makes up a map of the world
Geographically speaking he was a compass card keeping himself centered upon survival attracted, to all points of interest maybe it was love boat or sense of Mia still left, thrusting, in the back of the skull he needed to know, where his train might derail Never the push car, his locomotion was forward At the edge. Of town, he despises, the car, burned in a ditch his fingers raw empty, leaving his prints to service stations in life, and this a journey to next feelings were highly adept, breaking dawn
Seven days and a wake up of what the hell am i doing here the red carpet of rolling her up and sending her away again a nostalgic misanthropic principle a who's who in his new blue collar bible a shiny new toy is in order feelings always fade the heart wants what the heart wants a new companion that might appreciate the wwe,cold pizza and vodka a bit more someone who listens a little better and does'nt have so much to say after merely a week of intimacy he knows she knows the words but wishes she was not recommending regret when a relationship's run is at it's end he always admits it's time to move on
Jutting out his thumb once more to knock around, thrash down explore the more tour His shoes sway, stark right trouble done giving away, lesions laid lessons grumbling the grift taken by confession sun sinking sounds, map distance Ends of the road singing what's your hurry and along comes Mary Another spike to the mind, hang on slim He breathes inside, left handed praying to David peel, lower east side time Embers, burnt in memory, glow The beginnings, freak show tattoos, tapping todays tunes waltz and molt after the new taking his blazing razor as a car slows down gleaming sharp, hopping in for a new ride
First, I love the sign! I've seen something similar in real life, actually, and it always startles me to think about it. What a fine collaboration...your style is so different from your collaborator's, but you two mesh perfectly. It always amazes me how two people who are so different can come together and create something that is in a completely new style. Well done imagery, and I love the flow of this one; just sort of beats along like the heart.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
ahhh yes...those signs uuugh-creepy thoughts to slasher/hitcher flicks of the 70's and 80's...they a.. read moreahhh yes...those signs uuugh-creepy thoughts to slasher/hitcher flicks of the 70's and 80's...they are the ones that make You step on the pedal a little more and jerk the wheel at sight of a blowing leaf...Thank You for the kind words...others inspire me indeed and Jon has that hard edged f**k it attitude but then in here You see his loving side/missing side --he makes me think of the harsher world so it began as it did and I thought...what a PERFECT person for this--he IS a kind soul and has been mia from my radar for too long...
this is seamless, perfect and delivers a knock out punch! i know what you are capable of with your poetry but this is a perfect complement to your hand, well stroked and brilliantly executed. reads like a Kurt Vonnegut Jr, paperback novel....awesome!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
:) Thank You Quin I greatly appreciate that:) hope one day You will read Jons writings...he has a ve.. read more:) Thank You Quin I greatly appreciate that:) hope one day You will read Jons writings...he has a very terse and jagged way of writing...very harsh at times...striking blows like the harsh winds of cold ...and yet lion-hearted. Thank You My Friend!!!
First, I love the sign! I've seen something similar in real life, actually, and it always startles me to think about it. What a fine collaboration...your style is so different from your collaborator's, but you two mesh perfectly. It always amazes me how two people who are so different can come together and create something that is in a completely new style. Well done imagery, and I love the flow of this one; just sort of beats along like the heart.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
ahhh yes...those signs uuugh-creepy thoughts to slasher/hitcher flicks of the 70's and 80's...they a.. read moreahhh yes...those signs uuugh-creepy thoughts to slasher/hitcher flicks of the 70's and 80's...they are the ones that make You step on the pedal a little more and jerk the wheel at sight of a blowing leaf...Thank You for the kind words...others inspire me indeed and Jon has that hard edged f**k it attitude but then in here You see his loving side/missing side --he makes me think of the harsher world so it began as it did and I thought...what a PERFECT person for this--he IS a kind soul and has been mia from my radar for too long...