Brothers

"the id"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I peeked in                                                       he looked out
upon                                        along
a lighted doorway    the dark hallway
when                                         then
so long meant       Longing of faraway
today                                   someday
since in ragged          sense of perfect
form                                         thorn
what has become                                       everything is numb 
jagged                                     acting

Author's Note

the id

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

This is a very nice and different format. I think you are describing the psyche or part of it...Well done...:)

[Souladareatease]

Indeed true Sami You are correct!!!
Thank You!!!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know ...My pleasure...:)