Universal Perfect

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cradled within my hands
blowing softly
upon the glow
with utmost care, night breathed
day in one continuous stare
fronds waved from beside the lily pad
stars explode upon comet glide
and here resides
what was plane to see
skywriting and endless forest
The palmed universe
teeming with life
surely You've seen
silver streaks
they guide my hairline
pointing the finger of time
to now, where caressed
each cheek
tears forever flow
brung by the dust
as universe grows
the cradle opens
gently
stretching,
You see the center
of it, perfect place
my ever present
Blessed
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Reviews

[quinfinn]

this was more than vaguely reminiscent of some of my hippie days, way back in the day. feeling a connection to a beam of light or a tiny grain of sand. is it a galaxy, an entire universe i hold within my hands...dare i let it escape, as i hold and covet this immense piece of infinity? this is really deep....awesome.

[Souladareatease]

:) Thank You Kind Quin...always to feel the Giant as a shaper and BEing and insignificance of the dipstick or the flea...we that are stardust alive---greatly appreciated!!!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Loved this one...such a sublime and surreal feel to the words. The act of creation cradled in the hands of some omnipotent being is the same as the act of creation that us mere mortals do as well.

You see the center
of it, perfect place
my ever present
Blessed

Wow...impeccable. This was one of my favorite reads of the night!

[Souladareatease]

:) Thank You so much Dear Friday, I'm Glad You liked!!!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

You are very welcome, my friend. I always love your work.

[Jack...]

My friend, you amaze me once again. the images created by your piece are brilliant. I still look upon everything in the universe as a gift and probably always will. I find something new everyday that thrills me, like your poem. Very cool.

[Souladareatease]

So kind Jack, and greatly Appreciated!!! Indeed I agree truly in awe at times...quite often...Thank You Sir!!!

[Sami Khalil]

"as universe grows
the cradle opens
gently
stretching,
You see the center
of it, perfect place
my ever present
Blessed "
A blessed write with cosmic proportions...Well penned and conveyed...:)

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)