Child and Chalice

 

 

Flame of the candle,
bright within My Eye,
as the woods embrace ample cry
Sprite and Spry is dance alive,
wandering with chalice sipping the life,
so to dive this divine        
we savour the sublime,
speaking sparse the fluid of times
that are dry character calls,

stories, all, past and present playing ball,
to forge what’s clad the earth,
it's practice in chant in action.
Past present future
all one and the same
the beginning the end
were found in the stream,
flowed and stroked since time i was born...
a child of the woods rests

with ease as a breeze
wafts honeysuckle to the lips

 endlessly

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"stories, all, past and present playing ball,
to forge what’s clad the earth,
it's practice in chant in action.
Past present future
all one and the same
the beginning the end
were found in the stream,"
I love your latest pondering poems on life and love and nature too. Deep and profound. You have the mind of a thinker indeed...:)

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Sami, so kind!!!

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...Any time...:)

[Muse]

You always pick the most stunning imagery to accompany your words.

as the woods embrace ample cry "forgot period"

Then again...to keep it fluid and free flowing like the river in your photo...maybe leave out the comas and periods? Just an idea...don't know if it matters or not. The line breaks I think is all the reader needs to stop and breathe.

Lovely work.

[Souladareatease]

well...maybe the period looked at me funny...and the commas looked like hair and I wanted it long....damnit!!!!!!!!!! fashion critics :( .....:) makes sense what You Say...the only reason the Sprite and Spry are caps are to signify beings...the sentence is meant to run on....makes ALOT of sense to leave commas out exactly as You say in staying with "the flow" ...I fought with those...I hate commas at times...and this is one...but...many things would jumble wrong if I didn't....damned if I do damned if I don't.......Thank You for saying of the imagery...You as well pick stunning works and music!!! Thank You for the read and comments Dear CL!!!!!!!!!