Fondling A Mystery

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Forever feasting fleshed fantasies
Overlaying outstretched opulence opens
Naked nativity nestles newness
Draped down donning delicateness  
Lavishing long lurid licks
In isolated iridescent innocence
Never negating nearly nudging
Grifting gilded gifts given

Ample and alluring assets

Mysteriously melding my makeup
Yet yearning Your yoke
Steeps succulent savage salivation
Tonguing tenaciously tender trysts
Every encapsulated escaping effort
Riding right rare resides
Your young yet yearning

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I like the form, though it is not one I am typically caught using (difficult to do well, as you have done). You kicked it up a notch by using all of the beautiful alliteration, which is something that I employ myself and I personally love. There is nothing more beautiful than properly placed, like sounding words rolling off the tongue. As for the content...quite nice, but the true genius comes from the ease of the writing itself.

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Friday, this is only the second I've done...they help it seems if I am in a real creative slump...come up with the word or sentence ...and just go...almost like an...easy out you know...but purely to stimulate the non firing mind. Thank You for the kind words always!!!

[quinfinn]

this is the second piece of yours to reach me that came fully loaded with alliteration and wit. you do these quite well, good sir poet..... i shall simply have to try this one of these days..... nicely done!

[Souladareatease]

You REALLY should Weiron they are fun...I only have done one other look for it one day...(Galleria Juxtapose) You'll dig it...I will dig into Your fine writes soon My friend (if You accept my a*s) Thank You again for the read and kind comment!!!

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Weiron too kind definitely do one...they are fun...stimulate they do...I got turned onto these by a British Woman who specializes in them...She told me when She is in a slump for writing She does one of these to stimulate Her vocab a little...makes sense to me lol...always appreciate Your visits!!!

[Baby Ricochet]

"Ample and alluring assets."Ooh I know her. Good poem. I love the last line. Nice twist

[Souladareatease]

:) Thanks BR always appreciate Your visits

[Sami Khalil]

Man. You are on a roll...Good job...:)

[Souladareatease]

hahaha Thank You Sir Greatly appreciated!!!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)