Soul heart speaks (collab. By Grace and Soul)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gentle breeze caresses my cheek
Kisses gentle as ethereal fingers
Gently tucking my hair behind my ear
The shadow play of leaves dance
upon the forest floor
there my heart dances and wishes
for safe harbour
what desires eclipse your heart
indeed, what needs flows
as passion within flow
 
Eternal, the wish giving kiss  
to guide thine eyes, truly
deserve only ever bliss,
blessing this native, land
to skip like stones down stream
knowing Your heart glows,
twirling like the leaves,
shaking shadows adding colour
I stand to be the step
You, your rightful place
 
Such wishes high un-reached by possibilities
Higher than the stars sphere
Where twinkles adore the faces upturned
And yet ignore the lovers ardent pleas
Such beauty seen and yet un-attained
What stairs or ladders reach yon sky  
Where diadems of wishes hang  
What prayers induce the fall of a single star
From skies so far so distant so high..
Or words so sweet it tempts boars to soar?
 
These wishes borne since days of yore
promised and pinned to my heart... someday...
She would be known, dis-heartened tries
filled with masks that did lie crushed me
to ever in why's, but promise of The star
ONE so Above, True, sent, for in Ever our Love
have Only, certain curves, whispers on wind
freedom, Two our souls, living for One
penned are pigs, pray always to thee from knee
give unto You my life, Loving completely You
 
Promises and whispers, spells and curses of wiles
Like shooting stars from far up the velvet sky
Ashes of shining stars on dying grasses
Tempted by enchantments of passions unrealised
Should fate be balanced by words...
Pretty as it may be, oh so dazzling
That mermaids cast their tails away
Leave castles of gold and corals
Trust the gambles of destinies foretold
For promises made, come what may.
 
come what may? Today
tending the grassy meadow
be it not the tale life's promise
we balance fate by actions
building dreams castles, not walking away
away is far and alone with wander
merely existing life pondered
carry the torch not torture, chase hidden life
the hand that's stretched out swears in no doubt
Worship ever this day beholden of thine Heart
 
 
 
 
***Love makes your soul crawl out from its hiding place.
Zora Neale Hurston   
 

Reviews

[Muse]

For a co-write I cannot make out who penned what...meaning you two made a great pair. Despite the English being used "it felt like a secret language" it went beyond metaphors...beyond the tangible world of mermaids and grassy meadows. But I guess that makes sense "hence the title" Soul heart speaks...the soul has no boundaries...same as the heart...makeing this form of poetry feel like a free fall.

The one word that sums this up best...

Ethereal

[Souladareatease]

Thank You CL for such kind words ( the flowery didn't make ya too nauseated did it?:)

[Muse]

no..but it would be interesting to see your write really dark and ugly. lol..I'm not trying to get you to stoop to my level. I'm morbid..borderline fucked up and twisted. Forgive me.

[Souladareatease]

not at all...I share this same side too...I walk the path of both my dear...I shall send You a few read requests.....but ONLY when YOU wanna read...no pressure...but hit me back with Your own read requests!!!

[Muse]

I don't RR...I'm a scavenger...I read whomever and whatever. I guess I don't like people telling me what to read. Does that sound mean of what? I'm sorry, I just don't like reading the poetry that's being cranked out every five seconds by the same person over and over again...it spreads me thin...but what more can I do?

[Muse]

I always read those that read me..at least try to..I'm slow..but I always come around. Promise....

[Souladareatease]

O pish posh...I know You do...and hell even if forever I don't take that shite personal...time is nil...and precious...never do I mean or intend guilt of ANY kind ...only in jest would I suggest a thing...but I think You'll dig em...gimmie a sec.

[Muse]

that's cool, link me via email...I will read this weekend.

[Souladareatease]

PLEASE honest....never feel HAVE to...only when FEEL like it....gather some favorites for Me CL!!!

[The dark story]

whoa...impeccably penned!!...this one has got so strong and powerful imagery and diction which just make me stick to it till the very end...brilliant!!

[Souladareatease]

Thank You so much...My collabs with Grace are very fun writes indeed!!!
Appreciate Your kindness Atiba-Greatly!!!

[The dark story]

Heheheh…am I getting a little bit sensible rather than sounding like a stupid kid!! Thnx anyway and ur most welcome!!

[Souladareatease]

You have NEVER sounded as a stupid kid, Your writes have been concise since the day I first read You, Your works have life to them!!!

[The dark story]

awww...that's too sweet of you. but i know i'm stupid. i'll prove it...no matter how hard i try, i'll always read the question wrong during my exam n it's going on for 6 years..pathetic!! i can't call myself pathetic anyway, so stupid is better:)

[Souladareatease]

Thats just an active mind:) Ease and the practice of calm is something i am just now trying to practice....practice indeed...one day i hope to learn lol Soak up that education!!!

[quinfinn]

utterly seamless and perfectly penned, i can find no reason not to crow about this exemplary write. outstanding work.....

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Peg. Greatly appreciated...Lucky to have Garace's great pen to have me think in different ways...one day I hope You can View HER works...they are quite jaw dropping at times...She humors me.

[Sami Khalil]

"Eternal, the wish giving kiss
to guide thine eyes, truly
deserve only ever bliss,
blessing this native, land
to skip like stones down stream
knowing Your heart glows,
twirling like the leaves,
shaking shadows adding colour
I stand to be the step
You, your rightful place "
A very good collaboration between two great writers. Like they say : " Two heads are better than one." And this is a proof of that...:)

[Souladareatease]

Thank You ever so much Sami-humbled

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)