Whats now over my head

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He walked out of the big top, finally waving goodbye, "hello blue skies" he thought. disgruntled burning dreams sky rocket into pockets of savored things, he calls culls and breathes with the soft savage land, gleaming pieces on stiffer strings this marionette man dances slower, sifting sighs through lights that no longer blind but sparkle dazzled rays down as he gazes from atop his cliff edge, feeling the rush of jump as the edge just skims along far as he can see...tis many a wondrous views to be had...

Up here near, the clouds, the air, is thinner yes? So thoughts barrel roll, head misting mid-drift... yes...many a riff, but these cling encircled secrets breathe, somewhere behind him, he hears shouts of "come back", but he is alone walking in peace ever forward away from such tattered chaos, smoking wisps memory... such things...

Somewhere near, galleries opened their doors spilling out as he viewed dawns breaking and suns setting throwing acoustic electric sounds to this backdrop, paintings forever line the skies as the clown cries released relief, slowly wiping grease paint from his skin, adding colour to an already Beautiful horizon line...the big top moves from town to town, erected over so many heads...forever entertaining existence.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is absolutely vivid with imagery. Wow...I can picture each and every thing that you penned. I feel quite in tune with your poetic "voice" in this one, which I like. The idea of the big top and circus' has always fascinated me; this reminds me of a movie I once saw. Well written.

[Souladareatease]

thank you for the kind words and read Friday-much appreciated!!!
and the movie?--curiosity kills this cat;)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I can't remember the name at the moment but it was about the afterlife. Also reminds me a little of The Imaginarium of Dr Parnassus

[Souladareatease]

what dreams may come? (im to watch that this sunday)

[Souladareatease]

It's killing me.....

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I'll try to think on it...hmm...not Water for Elephants, but something else...an old man dies, goes through the stages of his life and he worked at an amusement park--died saving a little girl...cannot think of the name!!!

[Souladareatease]

--wails of a dying cat heard in the distance, as a young Lady carries on with her day. somewhere a movie is playing, images flashing in the back of a mind, forever emblazoned these images remain--nameless

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

...all true, except for the wailing of the dying cat... :)

[Souladareatease]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

"galleries opened their doors spilling out as he viewed dawns breaking and suns setting throwing acoustic electric sounds to this backdrop, paintings forever line the skies as the clown cries released relief, slowly wiping grease paint from his skin, adding colour to an already Beautiful horizon line."
An awesome write...:)

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Sir Much appreciated:)

[Sami Khalil]

Merci bocou...:)