Soulful night dawn

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Perfect                            

 

Realizations

 

Awake, drifting

 

Gathering in wander

 

Regaled  imperfect roads 

 

Travelled ones leading home

 

Life long search of my distant star

 

To set upon midnights hope plush gaze

 

Cry star fall as wishes plummet burning earth

 

Taken as blood pumped in silent screams

 

As a dark touch lingers voiding soft light

 

One separate heart beats bleak days

 

Held in crumble taped waited way

 

Shucks without pearls  swing

 

Hanging by threads

 

Riding this night

 

Forgotten

 

Alone

 

BLACKENED NIGHTS 

GENTLE DAWNS

AMIDST MY

MOUNTAIN HOME 

 

Kisses

                                    

Dreaming

 

Waking, alone

 

Tears of loneliness

 

Trickling gently down

 

Sleep-crusted unseeing eyes

 

Looking deep within a husk of lonely

 

Longing for one true love, away missing

 

Lost so far unfound untouched but hoped for  

       

Yet reaching with hope the hands touch

 

The will to find the ever filling warmth

 

Of one true heart’s responding yes

 

To fill this Soul’s lonely dawn

 

That will ever brighten

 

The bright dawn

 

Full of hope

 

Faithful

 

Love

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[AYVID]

"Cry star fall as wishes plummet burning earth" - Brings to mind all the heartbreak and pain....

"The will to find the ever filling warmth
Of one true heart’s responding yes" - So very touching!

A cry of pain and yearning in love set amidst a beautiful mountain home setting. The picture is very inspiring too. Thanks Souladareatease :)

[Souladareatease]

Thank You for such Kind words Divya!!!
Yes the cry for love we all Get eh???
light and dark---but never can I stay in the dark...dawn always breaks
appreciate the read:)

[AYVID]

Of course, it was my pleasure.
Very well crafted shapes too.

[Souladareatease]

:) thank You...yes mountains form sideways over here....but then again....ive been told my heads not on straight:)

[AYVID]

The view is divine anyway you look!~
:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Yet reaching with hope the hands touch

The will to find the ever filling warmth

Of one true heart’s responding yes

To fill this Soul’s lonely dawn"
This is some amazing writes and good poetry...Well penned...:)

[Souladareatease]

Thank You Sami for such kind words as always very generous!!!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[quinfinn]

but hell, this is brilliant! not only do you wax poetic with marvelous verse, but you have manged to sculpt a picture with your lineage and form which dazzles the artistic eye. this is what people mean when they refer to art in prose. awesome write!

[Souladareatease]

You are too kind- I thank You Deeply