Lilac in Spring
A Poem by Souladareatease
Relaxing on our porch, mind? Not at all but ablaze unfolding scents of Lavender, wafting from the page
Sharing this She smiled, saying Save that for me, I wish to walk amongst Deer and stream Talking, as we walked discussions upon knowledge
which are real, which are thought Deck to the trails trickling, surrender dancing Butterflies wings these holding hands, sipping Ice cooled lemon tea
We graze upon laughs
Sparkling stars, falling out of our pockets kicking stones out of the path twinkling eyes, we pick them up, cup in our hands, save the dust all shiny and new
Kept for the nights
When things look gloom we dance, to lights passion we play, on the stage When the night carries day Woods upon acres Lilac in the air mountains start to move
and spring, It does sing Paths to the moon Leaves that turn green
And the season begins Perfectly Persephone
© 2013 Souladareatease
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This poem is simply beautiful. So filled with love and affection, beauty and serenity. The lilac is one of my favorite flowers which unfortunately I can not grow where I live, the climate does not work well, I have tried and may try again someday. That being said, the fragrance of the lilac permeates through your words. Very nice.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank You kindly Jack, tis a favorite of mine too...and sadly neither I can grow this fine flower..... read moreThank You kindly Jack, tis a favorite of mine too...and sadly neither I can grow this fine flower...I haven't tried indoors...and may:) I appreciate Your kind words!!!
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11 Years Ago
Thank You for the Read dhaye!!!
and Kind comment...yes indeed You Are right!!!
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11 Years Ago
You read me well Muse...many don't...and think me too cryptic...they look deeper than they need to.... read moreYou read me well Muse...many don't...and think me too cryptic...they look deeper than they need to...You saw as it was meant...thank You for that...all things you cite....Yes indeed the love of lilac...I wish to find this field and claim it....or at least run around in it till they call the cops...thanks for the read and kind comments!!!
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11 Years Ago
indeed...not to egg you into page tag...but...serious...this work was a bit upon the sleeve...but I .. read moreindeed...not to egg you into page tag...but...serious...this work was a bit upon the sleeve...but I view most my stuff that a way........
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11 Years Ago
no I understand. I get frustrated when people instead of staying away from my stuff...will just say .. read moreno I understand. I get frustrated when people instead of staying away from my stuff...will just say "I don't get it"...well as a poet I don't ask you to get it...I don't even ask people to read me. So you don't get it...how does it make you feel?
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11 Years Ago
sorry..feel like ranting.
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11 Years Ago
HA!!!! TWO FOR TWO!!!:) RANT AWAY!!! AND YES TOTALLY AGREE!!! I LIKE THAT IT CAN MEAN SOMETHING TOTA.. read moreHA!!!! TWO FOR TWO!!!:) RANT AWAY!!! AND YES TOTALLY AGREE!!! I LIKE THAT IT CAN MEAN SOMETHING TOTALLY DIFFERENT TO A DIFFERENT SET OF EYES AT TIMES...BUT MOST SHRUG OFF WITHOUT THINKING...SOME
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Added on March 25, 2013
Last Updated on April 11, 2013
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