Galleria Juxtapose

 

  
Gardens grow graciously green
glowing gleefully within Gnostic glens
graft genres giving gracefully
Glower not gentle Giants
gladly goad guile ye Gods/Goddesses

Ale ailments arriving, anklets anchors
As accurately able
Asking audaciously, allurements
allegories, alienations and all
Acoustic alabaster art, awed


Braid beautifully, beads of Bard
breaking bread blithely
bringing bodacious boasts
Buggerd brags b*****d brine
beveled burns behooves brightness

Every Eos encapsulates encompassed envisioning
Elating everything
Escaping, eradicating endgames
Earls eloquence eave ease
Eventually evolution easily eludes effort

So serendipity surprises suddenly
sending sounds spoken silently
sporadic spurts spawned selflessly
surging synergy, sowing seeds, surely
sacredly, sage-like, stimulating sound structure  
     

 

 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is probably the most intense exercise in alliteration i have ever seen. not only does it work extremely well , but you have woven a gorgeous tapestry of grace and imagery within. outstanding work, dear poet, you may color me both envious and duly impressed!

[Souladareatease]

Thank Quin--we share envy then my friend for I adore Your writes and mind very much!!! (this write was for an Acrostic competition...it spells my name:)

[quinfinn]

wow, that part , i missed...very cool, indeed!

[Jack...]

Very. very cool. Just trying to figure out waht GABES means. :)> Honestly this was cool and required a lot of thought and imagination.

[Souladareatease]

Hehehe Thanks Jack Greatly appreciate the visit and kind comment:)!!!

[Helen Crutchett]

Firstly, I loved the picture....knew I was in for a treat. Wasn't disappointed....a brilliant write, dripping with alliteration. Flowing with a river of imagery and a jolly good read!

A masterpiece really!

[Souladareatease]

Thank You so much, Your praise is Humbling, and greatly appreciated!!!

[AYVID N]

I love the word play conveying a kaleidoscope of emotions and feelings so artistically. The artwork is divine too. You are a writer with a difference! My heart compliments odysseus!

[Souladareatease]

Thank You for such kind words, I am humbled!!!

[AYVID N]

You are welcome! :)

[Dhaye]

I don't know how to describe you as a poet. This is wonderful. You're very good in making rhymes. I love this. Keep up the good work!

[Souladareatease]

Thank You so very much, Humbled by Your words...thank You for the read!!!

[Dhaye]

:)

[M. A. Kilcorse]

What a wonderful wash of words! A treat for the eyes and ears :)

[Souladareatease]

I thank You and am humbled by Your kind words!!!
Thank You for the read!!!

[Zahra]

you've managed a difficult form in a beautiful way, wonderfully done. Thanks for sharing.

[Souladareatease]

I thank You for the read and kind comment!!!

[Kitty Davies]

Your usage of assonance and consonance it remarkable in this piece. It's hard to pull off such a form and usage of an image in a way.

[Souladareatease]

Thank you for the read and kind comment!!!