lazy bones

Lazy bones-blues

 

I was still street,

Dusty feet,

Lean dreams

I could only think these streets,

And how I could escape them.

 

Reviews

[LeeLee Ryder]

BRILLIANT, BRIEF, HOPEFUL & STREETWISE
LAZY BONE-BLUES COULD BE A SLAMDUNK
AT A SLAM POETRY FEST W/ANOTHER VERSE OR TWO
BUT ONE AGAIN, I REALLY DO LIKE IT'S BREVITY ...
LEELEE
Thanks for joining GBU GROUP

[Undying Glory]

yeah we all love to slack, but then it's so difficult to get up and do something...nice poem, short, sweet and simple