ugly

a friend with a drug problem that still looks cool and we know that it is just a matter of time before things start going down hill

wings like wind

a whispery kissy breeze

the call of a bird

a willowy graceful tree

a translusent sky pappered with frothy clouds

a brick wall complete with barbed wire

a sparrow flies by like a fairy star

a couch,woven and worn

a cheap plastic lighter,yellow and shiny

a rolled up paper rolled around sticks of weed.

a boy posh like a summer breeze,skin like milky chocolate

delicate like..like..like moonshine

a moment a time a life

lips plump and wet and dark like exotic wine

his eyes like city lights,simmering with golden fire,his neck long and graceful like..like an alpine river

his breth smoky and sweet like an imagination.

what a waste,i think

 

Reviews

[The Cougar's Den]

Very well written, your metaphors are seamless with one another. Great write on such a bitter subject.

[Allmax]

Wow such imagination. The ending took me by surprise. Awesome read all the way through, and very easy to read. Kept my attention completely. Thanks for sharing...

[Tenten]

you got me tearing up on this one, cuz a while back i was couting days before he dived and then he got back up and i counting days to see if he dives again, but wow, so wow, this has a feard sentiment that's been on my heart for so long spalshed right across the screen and thank you...really thank you.