Wishing For Your Love

This is a poem I wrote awhile ago about the person I was then trying still to get over and I finally have but I still like the poem

I look to see your beautiful eyes stairing back

I weaken and a smile cracks

I must truly be deranged

To honestly think you could have changed

 

You know you make me weak

And so into my life you again try to sneak

I really want to believe

You will give your heart for me to recieve

 

You know me too well

That in my thoughts you dwell

I finally look away

I know far from you I should stay

 

If I, again, entrust my heart to you

I'm not sure what you would do

I don't want again to grieve

As I watch you leave

 

If you were to get another chance

Will you promise to teach me to dance

Hold me in your arms

Working your natural charms

 

Tell me you love me

And together we will always be

Will I be close to your heart

If we have a brand new start

 

Will you forget the past

And just be content for our love to last

Laugh when I try to be funny

With your chuckle sweet with honey

 

When you learn that what we feel is real

Will you drop to the ground and kneel

Ask me to be your wife

Through happiness and strife

 

If I sya yes with everything I live for

Will you give me just as much or even more

As I walked towards you adorned in white

Will you be thrilled with the sight

 

When I say I do

Will you say "me too"

When you first kiss my lips

Will there be a shiver sent even to your finger tips

 

As we grow old

Will it still be me you'll be wanting to hold

For everything you did before, will you continue to apologize

Even till the day the sun doesn't rise

 

Am I just wishfully thinking

Or will this really sink in

Are you just going to be my friend

Or can't we please try again?

Reviews

[Lorrie]

Very well done. I believe that everyone at one time or another has or will ask these questions or will have at least thought of asking them, afraid of learning the answers to what these questions hold.

[Adeline]

good rhyming, but a little long for my taste. but really good over all. :D