My Hero, Aragorn

I LOVE YOU!

 

To my hero, Aragorn

 

I will be your lovely Arwen

 

From you I never wish to be torn

 

You are of the finest men

 

 

Let me be your heroine

 

As I will let you be my hero

 

Our lives would be full of adrenaline

 

And together we will be cavalero

 

 

You take my breath away

 

And yet you show me how to live

 

All the evil you do slay

 

My heart to you I do give

 

 

Whisk me off my feet

 

Tell me you love me

 

Hold my hand as we wave and greet

 

Together forever, you and I will be

Reviews

[Scott Free]

Love Aragorn...and this poem is really in his kind of style.
There are a few places where I thought the wording just might be rearranged a little, but other than that it was really good!

[Arwen]

really good poem! like AND! said it so simple but it says a lot more. a really good peom nice job. :-)

[Jetta Zippora]

Awesome write! I love it!

[Adeline]

I absolutely love this poem Autumn! You should submit in my Du Vrangr Gata group. I especially like the hero cavalero rhyme, it's awesome!

[Vitamin A]

this is excellent! I love how it's so simple, but it says so much

[Adeline]

Ooh, Peter and Arwen are gonna be sooo jealous! Good poem, this makes my poems seem very inferior. I'M jealous! :)

[Lady leah]

very nice, I loved it.