Chapter OneA Chapter by OcularfractureRemy is inexplicably smitten with a girl who happens into the shop where he works.Her voice was low and smooth, like the steady waters of an
untouched lake, pronouncing every letter of each word in a gentle flow of
absolute perfection. Long, scarlet hair cascaded down freckle dusted shoulders,
spilling out over a soft, porcelain chest, just barely hidden behind a light,
flower-print dress. As she moved her lips to speak, I could see that the corners
of her mouth seemed to be naturally turned up in a vague smile, giving her the
appearance of someone who was always incredibly kind to everyone she met. Her intense green eyes pierced me from across the counter,
as she tilted her head, letting that deep crimson hair slide down across her
neck. “Did you get that?” she asked, allowing the smallest smile
to wash over her face. I blinked, realizing that my mouth was hanging open, my ears
completely void of whatever she had just said. “I’m sorry,” murmured, in an attempt to keep the
embarrassment from showing in my voice. “What was it you wanted?” She giggled pleasantly, that warm, smooth voice filling me
up with sunshine. “A small soy latte,” she said. “No whipped cream, please.” Nodding, I punched the order into the screen of the
computer. “Will that be all?” I asked. “Yes, I do believe so.” “Then your total will be $3.49, please. I’ll have your order
ready at the other end of the counter.” Feeling the heat of the blood focused into my face, I was
glad to turn my back and busy myself in the making of the coffee, though I was
sure that she was still standing there watching me, laughing inside. When the coffee was finished, I wrapped it in napkins and
brought it over to the counter, where she stood, beaming at me. “One soy latte, sans whipped cream,” I said. “Thanks so much. Oh, and by the way… You never took my
money. Here.” Stretching out a long, elegant arm, she reached over the
counter and placed a heap of paper in my hand. “Keep the change,” she said with a smile, before turning her
back and stepping gracefully from the shop. Mouth hanging open, I hurried back to the register, ready to
put the money inside. As I looked down into my hands, however, I noticed that not
all the paper was actual money. There was enough cash to cover two lattes, and
in the midst of bills was a small slip of yellow paper with something small and
curvy scribbled across it. Bending down close, I found that it was the neat, elegant
handwriting of a woman. “Don’t drool,” it read. “Just call me later. "Sunny” Below were seven, neatly written digits. And that was how it happened that I, Remy Clover, first met
that girl, Sunny Skye. Looking back, I can’t really remember what it was that made
me leave work early that day, just so that I could get home and call her. She
was a girl, just like any other, and I was just a guy, broken hearted from a
past relationship which never seemed to heal. Still, in the strange way that things sometimes work, I was
out of there as soon as I could, claiming that my stomach was feeling sick,
which was only half true. Yes, I felt ill, stomach churning and burning like an
internal combustion engine, but unlike my manager, I was aware that the queasy
feeling was entirely unrelated to any actual illness, and rather, related to my
own excitement and an unnatural desire to contact that beautiful girl and learn
more about her. This was early September, that horrible gap between where
summer ends and fall begins, leaving you with beautiful weather, but too many
mosquitoes to actually enjoy it. Where the days become shorter and shorter, stealing away
your few free hours of daylight after work until one day, you leave in the
evening and it’s already gone dark. On the day that I left work early, however, it was only
about four o’clock, and the sun was still hanging fairly high in the sky,
shining down on every reflective surface in existence, bathing me in an unnatural
and extremely hot light that I wanted to hide from as quickly as possible. Even the inside of my car was a furnace on the drive home,
despite the air conditioning pushing itself to the limit in an attempt to
provide cool air for me. I cursed every person with one of those flat
windshields that seemed to reflect the sun so much worse than your average
convex sheets of window glass. To make matters worse, it seemed clear that a red-light
curse was heavy upon me, unrelenting, no matter how many traffic lights I had
to pass just to get from the café back to my one-bedroom apartment. Not a single light had the decency to be green, or even
yellow for me, and by the time I finally reached the parking lot of my low
budget apartment complex, my uniform, hair, and even my undergarments were
fully drenched in sweat, and I felt like someone who had just hiked through a
desert without a map. Using the last few drops of my energy, I managed to cart
myself inside and dump my clothes in a heap on my bedroom floor, before
stumbling into the bathroom and submerging myself into an ice cold shower. At the very least, my stomach had calmed down sufficiently,
and as the cold water spilled onto my skin, I could feel my stamina slowly
returning. Once my invisible energy gauge was back to full, I stepped
from the shower and rubbed myself down with a towel that I kept forgetting to
wash for weeks, despite the time that I accidentally spilled Chinese food on
it. With every stroke of the towel, I was rubbing old sweet and sour pork into
my skin, and barely caring about it. I would wash the towel that day, I told myself. I would. Of course, I never really did end up keeping that promise,
but this fact is irrelevant in comparison with everything else that took place
on the day that this story begins. What eventually happened was I threw on some clothes, one of
the last few outfits I had clean, and trudged out to my living room where I sat
down beside the phone. In the midst of my internal battle between whether to call
immediately or wait, I realized that I didn’t even have the paper on my person. Getting back up, I went to find my work pants, hoping that
my buckets of sweat hadn’t completely drenched the delicate slip of paper with
those beautiful seven numbers on it. I reached into the pocket of those black pants and found, to
my dismay, that the paper was damp. As I unfolded it, however, it became clear
that the written note was still perfectly legible, so I brought it back out to
the living room and took my place once again in my chair beside the phone. To this day, I don’t remember exactly how long I sat there,
fighting with myself. I wanted so badly to call her and hear that dark, sultry
voice again, but at the same time, I was afraid that she would answer and I
would be unable to speak, making an a*s of myself. By the time I finally put my foot down and seized the phone,
forcing myself to grow some balls and make the call, the sun was already down
past the horizon, hanging on by only a small fragment of teal blue light. Looking at the paper, I was careful to punch in one digit at
a time, avoiding a misdial. And the phone rang It rang and it rang, and it continued to ring until at last,
it stopped and was replaced with a low, familiar voice. “Sunny Skies don’t come out at night,” it said. “Better luck
tomorrow.” There was a pause, and then a beep, and then I was
confronted with a somehow terrifying silence, for which I was unprepared. My voice wouldn’t work without a cue from my brain, which
was being particularly stubborn, and so without leaving any sort of message
other than a short, uncomfortable silence, I hung up the phone, sitting back in
my chair. Real smart, Remy. Way to not leave a message. Now how will
she know to call back? Smooth move, moron. For the rest of the night, I kicked myself around my
pathetic apartment, regretting my own stupidity. I didn’t want to call back again that night, in case she was
in bed, but I didn’t really want to wait until the next day, either. The excitement and longing had put me into a state of
extreme impatience that seemed like boredom, as I had trouble finding something
enjoyable to do. In the end, I wound up just lying in my single bed, staring
at the ceiling and making pictures out of the texture, while thinking about
Sunny, until at long last, I drifted off into a hopeless sleep, filled with
images of the beautiful miss in the flower print dress. © 2012 OcularfractureAuthor's Note
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Added on June 14, 2012 Last Updated on June 19, 2012 Tags: Remy, Clover, Sunny, Skye, Coffee shop, barista, soy latte, phone number, virgin AuthorOcularfractureBennington, NEAboutI've been writing since I learned how. I'm not saying that 5-year-old work was any good. All's I'm sayin' is that the passion has been there as far back as I can remember. My mother always read me sto.. more..Writing
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