It Never Ends

ew poetry

The music calms, the music calms me
my deepest fears, my darkest fears
it feeds my soul, it beats in me
my everlasting heartbeat
Heart beats, my heart beats
the beast inside I can't resist
may all the troubles disappear
the smoke of what will never end

Reviews

[FarisGreybear]

i love the word order, beautiful syntax. if i could offer any suggestion, i would probably put more space, or syncopation in the physical presentation. like this: line1. the music calms, line2. the music calms me, line3. -----space-----,line4. my deepest fears, line5. my darkest fears....... and so on and so forth. I really like this for its deep meaning packed into such brief and powerful thoughts and word.

[October Callow]

Cool beans thank you fo da feedback XD

[Jamestown]

So true, music is therapeutic for sure, I have a piece called sweet sounds, you will probably enjoy.
Awesome piece of work, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Brittany Zedalis]

Surprisingly, I like this. I don't usually like things with a lot of repetition, but it works really well in what you've written. Write on! :)

[October Callow]

Oh my gosh thank you ^^