Down your dark road

a write about domestic abuse written a bit abstract

Peaceful where the water flowed endulging in soft grassy moore beneath the lofty old pine tree's the treasure of my lore. My muse, the song of innocence. Nature's love intune in me. Then the rays of sun dispersed the willows wept, bend and sway.... Gray you turned the world. Loved into a bitter sickness. Diseased the country way of likeness in my heart. Down your dark road we drove, lost forever and all time.. cloak and daggers still the breath wings of virgins fly..... Forever cursed the beauty tainted crystal pools lost inside a whirl of madness when the tainted breath of hell unfurled. Look away from the stolen glaze the gaze of dark with the eyes knowing is no mystery swing wide..... open the gates. Hold onto only air, hold on for all your might. Bated breath of sins first cause from then.. no looking back. The road traveled down your dark road.. Behold the sins of grays, tainted pools of black and blue broken jars and dropped flowers jigsaw perfect break the rules. Wore your mark you branded once the beautiful eve. Scared of shadows and of nothing the moon seemed bring grief. Down your dark road voided of all beauty twisted mind warped into nothing count the minutes down. you are my ultimate nightmare....... haunting forever more

Reviews

[Danielle Asher]

very traumatic experience but very well illustrated in words. i like the use of color words to paint the picture of darkness. It gives you a certain feeling. I always like to commend women for being so brave on expressing their pain and experiences. It takes a lot of courage and it not only empowers you but it empowers other women and men who have suffered trauma that can read it and know people like yourself that are strong enough to come forward with their story.

thank you.


peace and joy to you,
Danielle

[Deborah Shepard]

beauty loved it