Chapter One

It was a warm Spring day and Eleri approaches the river. "Good morning, little friends" she sang to the birds. Eleri loved nature and nature loved Eleri.  Her long silvery blond hair flowed down, just above her bottom.  Her eyes glistened like the ocean. Eleri removed her dress and undergarments.  Folding them neatly under a tree, the wind blows and hardens her n*****s of her perky breasts.

She went for a swim, not knowing someone was watching her.  He peered through the trees, smiling. "It's her" he stated. "It's Eleri"  He climbed down, and walked towards her.  "Who are you!" Eleri screamed, covering her bosom.  "Forgive me, Lady Eleri.  I didn't mean to startle you."
"Who are you, and how do you know my name?" Before he could answer, she snapped at him again. "Turn around so I can get dressed"   

"Lady Eleri, I have been sent to find you by your father, your real father.  My name is Kai" he said. "My real father?" Eleri questioned. "You are mistaken sir, I am Eleri Bowen, daughter to Lord and Lady Bowen and twin sister to Llyr."  She started to become angry, and clouds begun to form in the sky. "You need to leave, Kai. Get off my father's land!"    "Haven't you ever wondered, my lady, that when you're angry a storm brews.  When you're happy, the sun shines, and when you're sad it rains.  Haven't you wondered how every time you plant something, it grows quickly and beautifully.  You have power, Eleri.  You are daughter to King Huw, of the Faery. You were born at midnight, under the full moon of the Winter Solstice.  Your mother, died in childbirth, and your father left you with Lord and Lady Bowen at the request of your mother, Anwyn"   She stared into his emerald green eyes.  "King Huw, of the Faery? But, he isn't real, it's just a story my mother told me growing up."   Kai brushed his hand through his blond hair.  "I assure you  my lady, he is real and has sent me to find you"

"No!" Eleri screamed and ran towards her home.  As she approached the gate, she started screaming, "Mother! Father! Where are you? "   Lady Bowen came into the hall.  "My child, what is wrong, it's as if you've seen a ghost"   "I met this man mother, a young man around the age of 20.  He told me I was not your child and I was the child of a faery king!  He wanted me to go with him.  Send Father out to get him off the land."  Eleri cried.   Lady Bowen sat quietly.  "Mother?"   "Eleri, you are not of my womb, but you are my child. You were left at our door on..."  Eleri interrupted, "the morn of Winter solstice?"  "Yes, you were left, wrapped in the silver blanket you have in your room.  It was a gift from the Faery people.  I knew you were special from the moment we laid eyes on you.  You were never ill.  You hardly ever cried, you were a perfect baby"
Eleri started to cry.  Her mother pulled her into a hug.  "I'm sorry" she said.  

Llyr came in, soaked from the afternoon rain. Seeing his mother and sister in tears, he feared the worst. "Mother, is Father..."   "Your father is fine, Llyr. Your sister and I were having a talk." she stated.  Eleri stood up and wiped away her tears. "Yes, Llyr, all is fine.  Mother, I am going out for a walk in the rain, I need to be alone."  Eleri walked out of the house, leaving Llyr puzzled and their mother sitting in the stairs.   When Eleri walked outside, the rain slowed to a stop, yet the clouds remained in the sky. She looked up at the clouds. "Am I really the daughter of a faery?" she thought. A strong wind picked up and she felt as if someone was behind her.  She whipped around and stared into Kai's eyes.  "Kai"   "Are you alright Eleri?" he says moving a stray hair out of her face.  She pushed her cheek into his hand. She gazed up at him. She didn't know why but she felt safe with him.  "Kai, why now? Why after 17 years?"  He smiled, "because my lady, your father wanted you to grow up with humans, so you'd know your human side.  But now, as your 18th birthday is approaching, it's time to know your Faery side and become one with the Faery."  


"Are you also a Faery?" she questioned. "Or are you human?"  Kai spun quickly and disappeared, or so she thought. "Kai?"   "My lady, I am of Faery," he said, sitting on her shoulder, as he was no bigger than a dragonfly.  Kai's wings were silver  and they moved as quick as a hummingbirds.  They glistened in the sunlight as did his eyes.  Eleri gasped.  He flew in front of her, kissed her on the tip of the nose and he suddenly appeared in human form.   Kai had to catch Eleri as she fainted.

When she awoke, she was in her own bed.  She sat up, and Kai was standing there with her brother. "Llyr, what happened?"  "You fainted, lady Eleri, I brought you home.  I wished to stay with you but your brother wouldn't let me be here alone" Kai answered.  "Who is he to you Eleri?" Llyr asked angry.  "Um, he's a f-. " she sighed "He's a friend, that's all, a friend" Llyr accepted the answer yet didn't believe her.  Kai sat next to Eleri, holding her hand. "Are you alright, my lady Eleri"  "Yes, I'm fine. Thank you for bringing me home. You may go now"   "May I have  a kiss my lady?" He asked, staring deep into her yes.  "Yes, you may" and Eleri held out her hand.  Kai cupped her hand and gently pressed his lips against her fingers "Tomorrow, my lady.  I'll see you tomorrow, along the river.  Meet me when the sun is at it's highest point in the sky"  Kai bowed and walked away.   Llyr glared.  "You rest, Eleri. I'm going after Kai, I need to speak with him."
When Llyr made it outside, there was no sign of Kai anywhere  "Kai!" he yelled.  "Leave Eleri alone! Do not come back here.  She is too good for you." and she stormed into the home.  
Kai, who flying above him, whispered, "I'm sorry Llyr, I cannot leave her.  I am bound to protect her" and he left, disappearing into the woods.

Reviews

[Global Norskie]

Enjoying your storyline here :) You have a great imagination.

The conversation was a little bit hard to follow. You may want to consider spacing the conversation over more lines, instead of bundled together in paragraphs - it makes it easier to read.

Keep it up!