I really couldn't understand what you wanna say through this piece...i said as a reader.
i liked this piece because it's contained a lot of pain, love, depth, sorrow and joy...i said as a writer.
there's a need to construct this piece...i said it as an Author.
so, i think this review will help you to know what i want to say in a diff. diff. points of views..
Sublime in its simplicity. I see a lot of pain and a relationship born of desperation--no one wanting to move on. What does one do when the only passion left is the pain?
the documents on my computer are equal parts essays on the middle east and never-quite finished nonsensical stories.
i would like to say i have a zeal for life but my caffeine addiction must first .. more..