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A Poem by Oceana
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release

"
i'll sit here
and let you flick
my knee because 
even though it's 
hurting both of us
at least
we're

touching

-�"

© 2013 Oceana


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I really couldn't understand what you wanna say through this piece...i said as a reader.
i liked this piece because it's contained a lot of pain, love, depth, sorrow and joy...i said as a writer.
there's a need to construct this piece...i said it as an Author.
so, i think this review will help you to know what i want to say in a diff. diff. points of views..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oceana! This short piece oozes pain. They know it's no good, but some thing keeps them holding on. Well done. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sublime in its simplicity. I see a lot of pain and a relationship born of desperation--no one wanting to move on. What does one do when the only passion left is the pain?

Wow! so much in so few words...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oceana

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, so glad you liked it :)
Ok that is just awesome! You are a master of few words. Bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oceana

11 Years Ago

Why, thank you! :) You're too kind

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