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I just wrote what came to mind.

About an hour ago I noticed the sun

highlight the auras of souls resplendent;

motley hues danced among the eyes

of the living, but they did not see.

For a fleeting moment,

everlasting bliss visited our realm

in its journey to find those Enlightened

with a bit of celestial aide.

It happens, like clockwork,

at every dawn, at every dusk,

as the sun and the moon kiss hello

 and wave goodbye.

- k.p.

Author's Note

Tear it apart!

Reviews

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Love it! The descriptive words are amazing! I learned at least one new word while reading this! Just one area of improvement, I'm not sure if you want this to be just free verse, but it could use a little more rhythm to help it flow. But GREAT JOB!