i'm sorry i'm not her

you left me here

with my arms outstretched.

looking back at you walk away

i wonder what i did

to make you leave

i'm sorry i'm not perfect

i whispered

you looked back

it's not that

you're just not her

"her" echos in my head

i'm not her

i'm not pretty enough to be her

why even try

i cant live up to his high standards

i'm s**t to him

why waste my time

right?

why can't i get my mind off him

he treats me like trash

why must i be in agony

all because i can't be her

i can't get him

slit my wrists

black out

hit the ground

i can be her

somewhere else...

 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Difficult when you have to compete for the love of someone. Nice write.

[Moki]

"slit my wrists

black out

hit the ground

i can be her

somewhere else..."


Ohh, favorite paret, easily.

[MelyG.]

so touching...ive been there before....i can understand these words perfectly...just be you and if that isnt perfect enough for anyone then they dont desreve you...maybe you should take a look at my piece called Perfectly Imperfect...it says is all in that piece...

[Sarah]

I like the final two lines, very nice. :) One typo I found: "why wate my time" should be 'waste' =)