no fairytale endings

i want to waste my time with you

your kiss would make my day

your hand in mine would make my world.

look in my eyes, what do you see?

a coward

lonliness

failure

i look in yours, and see nothing

i tell myself i love you

but im not sure why i do

because inside it just tears me up

there's no over the rainbow

or happily ever after

no fairytale endings

just f**k ups and failures.

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Hate to say this, but I truly agree with this writing. I mean, this is my belief; "No Such Thing As A Fairy Tale, So Get Your Head Out Of Your A*s" That's one of my motto...

Anyway, it's still a pretty good one tho, so no worries...

[Ben Walton]

this is so good. i don't know. there are a few words that are iffy with the flow, but i really like it as a whole. the last two lines were like "boom".

:D

ps: thank you for the review!

[Moki]

"no fairytale endings

just f**k ups and failures."


I like that.
and awww baby i love you.