The Moon Illusion.

The Moon Illusion.

A Poem by Ellie
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If unknown, the moon illusion is the idea that the moon, when behind a setting of smaller proportion to it's self appears, but is not, bigger.

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The moon fixed into this oblivion,
Tainted; bright still, in it's surrounding.
A dew amongst salted tear drops,
Condescending, enticing.

I move, still a glimmer in the darkness,
The same moon; changed.
Bigger, brighter amongst these smaller things,
Only betrayed by my own senses,
An illusion,
You.

© 2015 Ellie


Author's Note

Ellie
Quite worried it has no interpretation outside of my own head.

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I'm not sure what is in your head, but in mine, the moon - open and clear herself - is unaware of the shadows she casts that can trick us into believing things that aren't true. Very beautiful. Just one, personal, critique - the semi-colon after tainted seems out of place to me. Otherwise, very beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellie

8 Years Ago

Thanks to you both! Much appreciated and very helpful. And Skye, that's exactly what it is about!



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I'm not sure what is in your head, but in mine, the moon - open and clear herself - is unaware of the shadows she casts that can trick us into believing things that aren't true. Very beautiful. Just one, personal, critique - the semi-colon after tainted seems out of place to me. Otherwise, very beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ellie

8 Years Ago

Thanks to you both! Much appreciated and very helpful. And Skye, that's exactly what it is about!
I really enjoy this ! The moon is my favourite muse, I love the way you personify it and give depth to the differences that the moonlight can have. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ellie
Ellie

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