Goddess

Let me drink from the waters

Of your lake or your sea

For the goddess is you

And the servant is me

Share with me all your wisdom

Give me all of your light

Your words are the stars

And I am the night

[Oh, goddess

Where have you been

Because without you

I’m not destined to win]

Author's Note

I'm really looking for a general opinion. Also, any technical writing issues that can be addressed. Opinions and constructive criticism is what i'm looking for.

Reviews

[RONGORONGO::^/JEUSSEN/F..]

YOU HAVE TOO MANY TECHNICAL WRITING ISSUES. THAT WOULD TAKE 8 YEARS TO FIX.

[RONGORONGO::^/JEUSSEN/F..]

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